(a) 50 (Love/Passion) Our Embrace Divine Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

(a) 50 (Love/Passion) Our Embrace Divine

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When will the warmth of your cheek rest against mine?
When will the stream of kisses gush on my ravine?
When will your heartbeat rhyme with mine?
When will I stop writing these verses and become thine?

When will the fire of love envelop us and enshrine?
When will the winter suddenly get warm with our heat combined?
When will we be drunk on each other and not need any wine?
When will the moon become bewitched with our embrace divine?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aldo Kraas 10 February 2007

You did it again You wrote a beautiful poem

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Catastrophe King 20 February 2007

FINE.... FINE.... Just very FINE! Each one of your poems are like prayers and wishes.... I am sure everyone is pulling in their influences to the Almighty to make your wishes come true. You write like an angel.

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Geoff Warden 10 February 2007

Very inquizative and imaginative write, , , , , well done

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Ernestine Northover 10 February 2007

I don't have the answers TO but hope you find them. Clever write, and a fascinating read. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Duncan Wyllie 10 February 2007

Come on T.O. this is brilliant..so captivating and original! Love duncan X

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 10 February 2007

T.O.>>>Questions, questions, ..the Readers tease & trust! Great work, here, young Poetess... FJR

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