lady grace


A baby angel


can't stop the flowing water
from mountains high
dropp to the depth of wisdom
down to the deepest ocean..

open the stamina of love
spread the seeds of fertility
blow the fire of passion
to that sweet lovely beauty...

fragrance of purity
hides the defective glands
blossoms unidentified
draw the simple brands...

let X meet Y in the tube of life
lining vessels welcome.. stay for a while
long days and long exciting nights
after few months... comes a new life...

Submitted: Monday, June 22, 2009
Edited: Tuesday, June 23, 2009

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  • Rookie - 3 Points Dwi Utami (8/3/2010 5:15:00 AM)

    Can't stop the flowing water.
    From mountains high
    Dropp to the depth of wisdom
    down to the deepest ocean.

    Owww this is reality water never stop flowing forevermore..great of you tanks also for coment..+10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 86 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (6/9/2010 2:54:00 AM)

    ‘Let X meet Y in the ‘tube of life’… after few months... comes a new life...’

    Fine metaphors…wow!
    10/10 [Gracefully]
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 20 Points Dr. Ratan Bhattacharjee (1/19/2010 7:27:00 AM)

    Ur poems have a touch of Blake' Songs of Innocence'
    Very nice. touching the deep of the heart (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Melanie Johnson (12/30/2009 6:37:00 PM)

    Hi lady grace! This is beautiful! ! ! I am now your biggest fan. :) Blessings, Melanie (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ngaio beck (11/6/2009 9:04:00 PM)

    The joy of our humanity, treated with grace and elegance (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 15 Points Eyan Desir (11/3/2009 5:38:00 AM)

    Excellent poetic...write (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 26,106 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/22/2009 5:57:00 AM)

    let X meet Y in the tube of life
    lining vessels welcome.. stay for a while
    long days and long exciting nights
    after few months... comes a new life... what a lovely rehearsed poem with words and life and wish for exciting results after few months..All you have vividly expressed in few lines the bare facts of life..you desrve kodos for it.....10

    read mine smiley...mother....mom i miss u (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sherri Coulter (9/21/2009 4:08:00 PM)

    ha....please, can't take any more.i need a break...everyone as lovely as the next best.............and comments to die for as well scores of 10's (Report) Reply

  • Rookie John Mcmanus (9/14/2009 5:48:00 AM)

    hi lady grace, very nice poem here, I like the way it conveys the joy of birth. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Raj Nandy (8/20/2009 10:45:00 PM)

    This is a nice poem with novelty in it! The title is also very appropriate! 10!
    -Raj (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 110 Points Myrtle Thomas (7/7/2009 4:50:00 PM)

    A way to look at life from another way to fertilize, although I do like the normal way! This reminds me of a poem I wrote on here called A BAG OF SEEDS, you might like it.I liked your subject and your form and flow very well penned.Great job (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Oneline Poet (7/6/2009 7:32:00 AM)

    Wonderful idea.....well thought out.....flows nicely (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 7 Points Jason Mcgookin (7/5/2009 11:46:00 PM)

    a nice clean way of describing the works of what nature intended for us to do i never thought of it that way...read my first time we made love pls... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie dr veenaa rai (7/5/2009 7:57:00 AM)

    what a lovely way to describe the start of life's journey! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie dr veenaa rai (7/5/2009 7:57:00 AM)

    what a lovely way to describe the start of life's journey! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie dr veenaa rai (7/5/2009 7:57:00 AM)

    what a lovely way to describe the start of life's journey! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Dr.Sanjib Das (7/4/2009 8:09:00 AM)

    I dedicate this SONNET to your poetic genius:
    X and Y make a baby,
    We feel happy.
    Your poem is a message of a new comer,
    We are your admirer.

    You have poetic quality,
    We respect your dignity.
    Like your baby angel, we adore you,
    As a poet we, the reader, love you.

    I appreciate your poem,
    To me, you are a name.
    You write poem with your genius,
    You become an Icon to us.

    I dedicate this poem,
    Only to spread your fame. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Christopher Flynn (7/3/2009 6:56:00 PM)

    A baby angel to grace our hearts.
    From the firey passions
    That perpetuate our kind
    We create another life.

    Nice poem I like the use of nature and science in describing the human procreation (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 59 Points PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE (7/2/2009 8:01:00 AM)

    'open the stamina of love
    spread the seeds of fertility
    blow the fire of passion
    to that sweet lovely beauty'
    so beautiful, stunning, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chizitere Ojiaka (7/1/2009 9:26:00 PM)

    This one is nice although i did not feel the emotions in the poem. I like your descriptions and your adjectives were just in place. It ie just a simple poem and i think it is good. (Report) Reply

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