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ngaio Beck
(11/6/2009 9:04:00 PM) |
The joy of our humanity, treated with grace and elegance
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Hasmukh Amathalal
(9/22/2009 5:57:00 AM) |
let X meet Y in the tube of life
lining vessels welcome.. stay for a while
long days and long exciting nights
after few months... comes a new life... what a lovely rehearsed poem with words and life and wish for exciting results after few months..All you have vividly expressed in few lines the bare facts of life..you desrve kodos for it.....10
read mine smiley...mother....mom i miss u
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Sherri Coulter
(9/21/2009 4:08:00 PM) |
ha....please, can't take any more.i need a break...everyone as lovely as the next best.............and comments to die for as well scores of 10's
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John Mcmanus
(9/14/2009 5:48:00 AM) |
hi lady grace, very nice poem here, I like the way it conveys the joy of birth.
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Raj Nandy
(8/20/2009 10:45:00 PM) |
This is a nice poem with novelty in it! The title is also very appropriate! 10!
-Raj
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Myrtle Thomas
(7/7/2009 4:50:00 PM) |
A way to look at life from another way to fertilize, although I do like the normal way! This reminds me of a poem I wrote on here called A BAG OF SEEDS, you might like it.I liked your subject and your form and flow very well penned.Great job
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OneLine Poet
(7/6/2009 7:32:00 AM) |
Wonderful idea.....well thought out.....flows nicely
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Jason Mcgookin
(7/5/2009 11:46:00 PM) |
a nice clean way of describing the works of what nature intended for us to do i never thought of it that way...read my first time we made love pls...
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