Allen Steble

Rookie - 0 Points (20/04/1987)

A Bad Day - Poem by Allen Steble

On a bad day the world seems...
Smaller
Duller
Meaningless
Cruel
Judgemental
Hatefu l
When that day is over I see its...
Bigger
Better
Colourful
Meanin gful
Compassionate
Loving
Stay away bad days
and bring on great days.


Comments about A Bad Day by Allen Steble

  • Rookie - 417 Points Angela Wybrow (5/20/2013 12:20:00 PM)

    Very true! Well observed! Great poem and to the point! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 9,229 Points Geetha Jayakumar (5/18/2013 12:59:00 PM)

    Good one. Keep writing. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,272 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (5/16/2013 12:46:00 PM)

    Hmm a lovely poem and u ended it finely. Ah atlast i cud coment. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 813 Points Antonio Liao (5/14/2013 11:40:00 PM)

    a lifeline speed of existence resemble in your lines....excellent piece for our national Library...a 10 /10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ambrosia A (5/14/2013 11:02:00 PM)

    So very true. I liked it. In reality we can't avoid bad days, we must pray for lesser bad days or strength to withstand it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,714 Points Ramesh Rai (5/14/2013 10:52:00 PM)

    ten out of ten. xlent write. wishing for a better world. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,903 Points Patricia Grantham (5/14/2013 10:01:00 PM)

    Hello fellow Poet, Nobody loves a bad day, unfortunately all days
    cannot be good otherwise we would have a perfect life.
    Life is not perfect we have to accept the bad as well as the good.
    A lovely poem and very sensible. Thanks for the invite. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Owain Glyn (5/14/2013 4:11:00 PM)

    If it's only a day we can get over it, it's when it's perpetual it's time to worry! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,840 Points Sekharan Pookkat (5/14/2013 12:29:00 PM)

    Make all days good.
    Think good
    Do good
    And make your days colourful (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 4 Points Nader Baheri (5/14/2013 12:15:00 PM)

    a bad day starts with a bad event.then we see the bad events happen repeatedly.but a good day is completely vice versa.just its about being negative or positive.
    cheers~nb (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 36,724 Points Gajanan Mishra (5/14/2013 6:22:00 AM)

    stay away bad days and bring on great days. great write, thanks.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 14, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, September 13, 2013


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