A Bad Poem For The Ages Poem by William Jackson

A Bad Poem For The Ages

Rating: 4.8


I thought I’d write a bad poem, one for the ages, signifying nothing.
Pavement suffocates the living earth just as bad poetry fills volumes.
Still, oblivious to the land’s rape, the masses enjoy sentimental blathering,
And all is well since professional wrestling rules even sports columns.

It matters little that only a select few appreciate the immortality of verse,
Or that God's world festers in the aftermath of inhumanity's touch.
Bread and circuses even now in this age soothe ignorance's curse.
To hope men feel soft earth, the wind, and grass is to expect too much.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nimal Dunuhinga 09 June 2006

Excellent William! Men never touch the soft Earth, wind and grass and everybody wants to fly it seems?

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WILLIAM...VERY WELL CRAFTED WORK HERE...BLENDING THE ORDNARIES W/ THE ABSTRACT...KEEN IMAGERY...GOOD PEN, , , '''''''''''''''FRANK

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Sandra Fowler 11 June 2006

My old friend Menke Katz used to say that the gold is in the sunset, but so few ever know or understand this. Praise for your world class poem. Kindest regards, Sandra

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Geoff Warden 13 June 2006

William nice write I enjoyed this

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Preeti - is here! 27 July 2006

Bad and this? Hardly..... It has such intricate meanign woven into the 8 lines. Brilliant! Preets PS - thanks for your comments on my poems :)

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Juan Olivarez 17 August 2011

If we all opened our eyes to what is around us, It would be a different world.

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Ron Flowers 05 June 2008

Not a bad poem, william.

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Riquetta Elliott 11 May 2008

Poetically expressive keep it up.

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Abha Sharma 20 March 2008

a true reflective verse for all poetic venture, I enjoyed reading it.

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Malini Kadir 02 March 2008

Not really so bad as it has touched every poets deep core...around the world! Cheers! !

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William Jackson

William Jackson

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