veeraiyah subbulakshmi


A Bag Of Air! - Poem by veeraiyah subbulakshmi

A bag, that is filled with air,
Once torn, the life is gone.
Liters of cream to polish,
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Comments about A Bag Of Air! by veeraiyah subbulakshmi

  • Niken Kusuma Wardani Niken Kusuma Wardani (12/25/2015 11:48:00 PM)

    There is a time for everything
    For the bag with air, to be torn to nothing
    Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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  • Gajanan Mishra Gajanan Mishra (6/1/2014 5:29:00 AM)

    really lovely and beautiful piece. (Report) Reply

  • J K Lee J K Lee (1/28/2014 7:03:00 AM)

    Thanks, a very good, inspiring and thought-provoking poem. Best Wishes, Merton Lee, Singapore (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Grantham Patricia Grantham (8/2/2013 2:01:00 PM)

    At times we may hold our heads so high that we refuse to see others
    as they are. When we do this we are compared to a bag of air that will
    soon deflate and show what we really are. Very good. (Report) Reply

  • Raj Arumugam Raj Arumugam (1/9/2013 3:34:00 AM)

    Once torn, the life is gone.
    When the plate is too hot,
    it will be dropped, as we drop. - a poem of clear imagery and ideas, VS... (Report) Reply

  • Wahab Abdul Wahab Abdul (12/12/2012 9:32:00 PM)

    very nice poem, i enjoyed, (Report) Reply

  • S.d. Tiwari S.d. Tiwari (11/24/2012 4:48:00 AM)

    Excellent presentation of various aspects of life in great flow like water. Loved reading (Report) Reply

  • Rumi Roy (10/27/2012 1:26:00 AM)

    A poem which can just be termed as great. Thank you for gifting us with this. (Report) Reply

  • Ravi Sathasivam Ravi Sathasivam (10/16/2012 2:01:00 AM)

    Interesting write. Well penned. Enjoyed. Tfs (Report) Reply

  • Yash Shinde Yash Shinde (10/14/2012 2:07:00 AM)

    great poem, lovely thought (Report) Reply

  • Dave Walker (10/11/2012 5:26:00 PM)

    A really great poem, like it. (Report) Reply

  • Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (10/11/2012 2:36:00 PM)

    expoesed the bag (reputation) once torn all the garbage of one's life is there to see.
    Now that reputation is too hot to be associated with.
    So all contact with that person is dropped. (Report) Reply










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