A bag of air!

A bag, that is filled with air,
Once torn, the life is gone.
Liters of cream to polish,
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  • Raj Arumugam (1/9/2013 3:34:00 AM)

    Once torn, the life is gone.
    When the plate is too hot,
    it will be dropped, as we drop. - a poem of clear imagery and ideas, VS...

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  • Wahab Abdul (12/12/2012 9:32:00 PM)

    very nice poem, i enjoyed,

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  • S.D. TIWARI (11/24/2012 4:48:00 AM)

    Excellent presentation of various aspects of life in great flow like water. Loved reading

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  • Rumi Roy (10/27/2012 1:26:00 AM)

    A poem which can just be termed as great. Thank you for gifting us with this.

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  • Ravi Sathasivam (10/16/2012 2:01:00 AM)

    Interesting write. Well penned. Enjoyed. Tfs

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  • Yash Shinde (10/14/2012 2:07:00 AM)

    great poem, lovely thought

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  • Dave Walker (10/11/2012 5:26:00 PM)

    A really great poem, like it.

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  • Thomas A Robinson (10/11/2012 2:36:00 PM)

    expoesed the bag (reputation) once torn all the garbage of one's life is there to see.
    Now that reputation is too hot to be associated with.
    So all contact with that person is dropped.

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  • * Sunprincess * (10/11/2012 12:57:00 PM)

    impressive and interesting topic..enjoyed this one.. :)

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