veeraiyah subbulakshmi


A Bag Of Air! - Poem by veeraiyah subbulakshmi

A bag, that is filled with air,
Once torn, the life is gone.
Liters of cream to polish,
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Comments about A Bag Of Air! by veeraiyah subbulakshmi

  • Gold Star - 34,112 Points Gajanan Mishra (6/1/2014 5:29:00 AM)

    really lovely and beautiful piece. (Report) Reply

    3 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Freshman - 956 Points Merton Lee (1/28/2014 7:03:00 AM)

    Thanks, a very good, inspiring and thought-provoking poem. Best Wishes, Merton Lee, Singapore (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,106 Points Patricia Grantham (8/2/2013 2:01:00 PM)

    At times we may hold our heads so high that we refuse to see others
    as they are. When we do this we are compared to a bag of air that will
    soon deflate and show what we really are. Very good. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Raj Arumugam (1/9/2013 3:34:00 AM)

    Once torn, the life is gone.
    When the plate is too hot,
    it will be dropped, as we drop. - a poem of clear imagery and ideas, VS... (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,776 Points Wahab Abdul (12/12/2012 9:32:00 PM)

    very nice poem, i enjoyed, (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 947 Points S.D. TIWARI (11/24/2012 4:48:00 AM)

    Excellent presentation of various aspects of life in great flow like water. Loved reading (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 51 Points Rumi Roy (10/27/2012 1:26:00 AM)

    A poem which can just be termed as great. Thank you for gifting us with this. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 14 Points Ravi Sathasivam (10/16/2012 2:01:00 AM)

    Interesting write. Well penned. Enjoyed. Tfs (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 122 Points Yash Shinde (10/14/2012 2:07:00 AM)

    great poem, lovely thought (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,794 Points Dave Walker (10/11/2012 5:26:00 PM)

    A really great poem, like it. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,229 Points Thomas A Robinson (10/11/2012 2:36:00 PM)

    expoesed the bag (reputation) once torn all the garbage of one's life is there to see.
    Now that reputation is too hot to be associated with.
    So all contact with that person is dropped. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 14,311 Points * Sunprincess * (10/11/2012 12:57:00 PM)

    impressive and interesting topic..enjoyed this one.. :) (Report) Reply










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