veeraiyah subbulakshmi


A Bait And I. - Poem by veeraiyah subbulakshmi

In the ocean of passion,
Reason has little liaison,
Fish abound, blink and twinkle,
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Comments about A Bait And I. by veeraiyah subbulakshmi

  • Gold Star - 9,846 Points Heather Wilkins (8/3/2013 12:55:00 PM)

    a good write. I am going earnestly for the fishing in the oceans of blue and nothing. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 1 Points Dwayne Gordon (1/30/2013 4:57:00 AM)

    Life becomes a dream to dream.....
    Brilliant work of art... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Meera Panigrahi (9/9/2012 8:14:00 AM)

    I am going to fish in the ocean of passion..... Lovely line (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 182 Points Karen Sinclair (8/22/2012 4:13:00 AM)

    The ratings on this piece as far as im concerned do not reflect how well this is written, it is so cleverly placed and perfectly put, you have a style which is very unique and i for one think it is marvellous and honest (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Roongratt Srimanchantha (7/19/2012 2:06:00 AM)

    Wow..very beautiful! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 70 Points Johnathan Juarez (5/12/2012 11:22:00 PM)

    quirky and full of life. love it (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,778 Points Dave Walker (4/16/2012 5:00:00 PM)

    A wonderful poem, like it, a great write. (Report) Reply








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