A Ballad Of Love And Lust Poem by Paddy Scott Hogg

A Ballad Of Love And Lust

Rating: 3.3


Are stolen fruits the most exciting?
Down on you with tongue delighting
As a butterfly lands on a flower
Then rough and wild hour on hour
A voracious animal, a wild beast
Spreads you out for his feast
Uninhibited bursts of passion
So gentle a tongue, then a lashing
Mouthfuls then fingers in so deep
Sucking and licking – forget sleep!
Stop don’t stop O stop please please!
Rivers run - I’m on my knees!
You grin demented wild and free
Laughing madly in pleasure’s glee
Untamed the passion erupts to bliss
Then a wet dirty hungry kiss!
Vesuvius erupts and earthquakes roar
Howling moaning, come back for more!
In a frenzied torrent of lust and passion
Waves of a storm, downward crashing!
Slow deep and in - the thrusting goes
Till faster faster the whole thing blows!
A runaway train smashing into a station
Eruptions fly in exultation!
Full body slamming from the top
Yields a fair good splashing crop
Full body slamming from behind
You love it babe – hard and kind!
From after midnight thru till noon
Like dogs in heat before the moon!
Entangled and caught within your snare
Your touch and love are all my care.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Linda Ori 07 November 2008

Well, now............ahemmmmmmmm.......let me catch my breath! If you call that a ballad, then I'm the Queen of Sheba! That was a rip-roaring feast of passion that begs to be screamed at the top of one's lungs. All I can say is I need a cigarette - and I don't smoke! Exhilarating read! Linda :) :)

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A lot of eroticism and passion in these words. Very interesting read.

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Colin J... 30 August 2007

Patrick, I would say you are one passionate kind of man. loved it, Colin J...

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Original Unknown Girl 30 August 2007

Wow P S Hogg, all this just because I was surfing the Top 100 UK poets! ! I've read this out to my room-mate (colleague that is..) and his answer was 'Well'! I think he found it as amusing as I! Brilliant rythym if you'll pardon the pun. Sounds like you both had a whale of a time.... and that's the point! Isn't it? HG: -) xx

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Marci Made 30 July 2007

Speaking of Lust......................etc............ who is she? ? ? ? ? marci.xo

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Galloway, SW SCOTLAND UK
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