David McLansky

Freshman - 992 Points (5/24/1944 / New York City)

A Bard Limp Stands - Poem by David McLansky

A Bard limp stands
Before the sea,
Resplendent in its majesty,
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Comments about A Bard Limp Stands by David McLansky

  • Gold Star - 17,695 Points Ramesh Rai (9/30/2013 10:09:00 PM)

    Beautiful thoughts, expression, emotion, write. a natural enchanting verse. loved your write. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 39 Points Malini Kadir (9/19/2013 1:03:00 PM)

    His cap is stuck with turf and hay
    His coat in strips wild flaps and flays;
    The wind whips up within the bay
    And gently chides him on his way;
    I could almost visualize these lines (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,991 Points Valerie Dohren (8/9/2013 6:28:00 AM)

    Excellent write, great rhymingand flow, and an interesting topic. Enjoyed. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,265 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (8/9/2013 6:20:00 AM)

    His many songs on maidens lips;
    His merry jests, his joyful quips,
    Still spoken of in taverns round
    Which others might have written down

    now worn out and cast away! a delight to read these wonderful rhymes. (Report) Reply








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