Susie Sunshine

Rookie (8-16-54 / United States)

A Beautiful Angel - Poem by Susie Sunshine

She is a beatiful Angel. She is walking next to me. She want to be resued. She wants to be set free. They didn't except her for who she was. What a beatiful Angel. And she is losted in the storm. They neglected her. Listened and caused her to scream. How could God let this happen to me.For I am that Angel who walks beside me. It's time that I live. So they could set me free. written 10/23/07 Posted 10/23/07


Comments about A Beautiful Angel by Susie Sunshine

  • Gold Star - 5,675 Points Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (4/6/2009 9:39:00 PM)

    Really sad and life goes on.If you get a chance please read my new poem SPEAK OF LOVE.Thank you. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie pied piper (10/17/2008 6:52:00 PM)

    I love this piece. It is truly beautiful. Well penned. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (9/9/2008 4:35:00 PM)

    'For I am that Angel who walks beside me. It's time that I live. So they could set me free.' A nice poem,10 for it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sarwar Chowdhury (8/7/2008 2:54:00 PM)

    ...finely expressed....10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 196 Points Dr.subhendu Kar (7/26/2008 11:30:00 PM)

    the beauty still glimmers by the remniscence when so deep and profound by the grace unequalled,10+, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 59 Points PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE (6/13/2008 11:14:00 AM)

    profound, deep thought 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dean Hope (5/22/2008 9:08:00 PM)

    few spelling errors but,
    i understood and i could picture her in my head thank you x (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 23, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 19, 2011


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