A Beautiful Beach Of Danger! Poem by Ramesh T A

A Beautiful Beach Of Danger!

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Golden Moon has appeared high above the night Sea;
Heavy wind is blowing fast after a long spell of heat;
Sea looks beautiful enticing new comers to swim soon!

But the 2004 Tsunami has changed the nature of Sea
From harmless beach into dangerous beach of beauty!
Swayed by beauty swimmers have drowned to death
By sudden high tides that develop now and then there!

River tributaries joining the Sea mouth has created island
Where many go for boating seeing the beauty wonderful
And also swim long swayed by the enjoyment soothing;
Then the tragedy occurs by sudden current in the Sea!

Warning boards are displayed here and there for all to see;
But who cares at them while enjoying comforts and beauty!
Alertness when let loose men of ease can’t escape tight noose!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 October 2009

Warning boards are displayed here and there for all to see; But who cares at them while enjoying comforts and beauty! Alertness when let loose men of ease can’t escape tight noose..turn against and face the conseqauences..it is not without any reason.... we are doing so much injustice to nature so are the bad results for us....beautiful poem o envy so much....10 read mine..machhu....life at obelisk..shall we die

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 12 October 2009

A really provocative piece and a compelling read. Great work

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Raj Nandy 11 October 2009

A nice poem, with the last line expressing proverbial truth! -Raj

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Carol Gall 07 October 2009

nicely written ramesh 10

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Shakuntala Sharma 07 October 2009

the enticing beauty of the night sea is nicely expressed

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Ramesh T A

Ramesh T A

Madurai, Tamil Nadu, India
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