A Beautiful Remark Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

A Beautiful Remark

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Dear poetess no to full marks
Love can’t be neglected with that remarks
You may be master of philosophy
You might have earned a prestigious trophy too

It reflects you are well read
You can comfortably lead
You are queen of emotions
No doubts about it with any questions

You are not like athelet sitting in pavalion
You can’t live permanently with oblivion
Love is eternal and reflects in our behavior
One must come out of it and act as savior

Books are out guide and philosopher
It leads any individual to live in dignified manner
It is beter late than never
The isolation has to be ended for ever

Who can assess for self or portray?
People may express unhappiness and even dismay
It is not logical to allow sentiments to come out and play
Let us confide it to self and sincerely pray

It is individual’s personal domain
No one can force to part with or retain
It is one’s own prison or free world
The relation can be developed into hot or cold

We might have been dejected on many counts
There may certainly be some pressure to mount
That should not lead to any frusteration
It must help to build self for elevation

Let your guidance help people to overcome
No to isolation and openness to welcome
It has to be in all the respect a positive outcome
It may help not to many but certainly to some


I wish and appeal you to shed the thinking
Vanes are there for fresh intake and breathing
It may certainly be not the preaching
But it may be golden way of teaching

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kolawole Ajao 19 September 2010

A beautiful remark indeed. Continue to write, sir.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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