Antonio Liao

Freshman - 813 Points (november 7,1957 / dapitan city)

A Big Joke Is A Laugh - Poem by Antonio Liao

a simple smile, wouldn’t hurt you nor annoyed
your presence, it’s the big laugh that hunt
your being and destroyed your precious moment
with whom you consider the hour of happening

rush to touch the face of smooth but grandeur
facet of life, need not to be same, it’s the surface
of the internal manifestation of what the spirit
move, a lining of everyone’s feeling of the Inner
passion of the heart and soul

thou it brings high, the stone floats to see the very
surface of the ground, wishing all the sky that the
star wouldn’t give up to shine, even if the looming
light witness the darkest night

hail on the rough sweet words that kill a tail, yet
a blooming flower rotten the flower to fly ……


Comments about A Big Joke Is A Laugh by Antonio Liao

  • Freshman - 607 Points Rekha Mandagere (7/6/2011 12:27:00 AM)

    Every smile is meaningful. It clearly guides us to differentiate between the two different smiles, one is progressive and the other is harmful. Thanks friend, for sharing such a wonderful message. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 166 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (9/24/2010 2:59:00 PM)

    ‘…the stone floats to see the very
    surface of the ground, wishing all the sky that the
    star wouldn’t give up to shine, …’ ~ Simply Brilliant …why star stop shining so long your poetry shining…well done imagery very aptly designed … thanks for sharing Hon'ble Poet Antonio
    Regards
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,995 Points Pranab K Chakraborty (8/11/2010 1:56:00 PM)

    yet
    a blooming flower rotten the flower to fly ……

    Simply fantastic. Beautiful the utterance carries the totality.

    it’s the surface
    of the internal manifestation of what the spirit
    move,

    And the poet moves through a classic way of poetry to reflects some unfolded truth of life with moderate expression. Well-written good poem. Thank you.

    Regards,
    pranab (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Anita Trivedi (8/1/2010 6:08:00 AM)

    Wow what a great message.... Just loved it....... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 55,490 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/30/2010 7:53:00 PM)

    a simple smile, wouldn’t hurt you nor annoyed
    your presence, it’s the big laugh that hunt
    your being and destroyed your precious moment, , , ya nothing will hurt you but till stay as smile...nicely composed for a very good message, , , ,10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 29, 2010

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 6, 2011


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