(September / Dennilton)

What do you think this poem is about?

a big tree in ntoane!

Big tree by the road side in Ntwane
In the morning the shadow lean on the road
Under it! It clenches calm breeze.

Its shadow is quite and silent like lasagna
Covering the other half of the roadway.
Separating the road with different paintings.
And my body was shaded with dark mark.
As I pass through it

The brownish stem
Branches caving towards me on the road
With green and small leaves
Dropping over me.
Mildly falling on my head
Like a snow falling to the ground

The shadow sheltered me from the sun and sky
Shielding me as if I was a 'King' deserving praises
And laying a brown carpet for me to walk on

big tree hanging in the road side
Road that is less travelled in the morning
It praises every pedestrian who pass through it in the morning

Submitted: Thursday, August 09, 2012
Edited: Wednesday, March 13, 2013


Comments about this poem (a big tree in ntoane! by Jacques Sprenkie Mateya )

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  • Saadat Tahir (8/10/2012 5:16:00 PM)

    nice ideas congealing nature and yet in contradiction highlighting death...

    liked the over all impact of the poem
    cheers

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  • Adesitimi Taiwo Damilola (8/10/2012 11:49:00 AM)

    Nice poem! I like the usage of your words

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  • Charles Jagongo Ogola (8/10/2012 8:42:00 AM)

    This is a good poem. I like it.

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  • Kelly Seale (8/9/2012 12:10:00 PM)

    Jacques, a wonderful tribute to such a precious tree, more than a tree... a monument to all living things.
    -Kelly.

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  • Unwritten Soul (8/9/2012 10:50:00 AM)

    Nice idea Jacques, it is a cool write, write more OK_Unwritten Soul

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  • Sivashanmugam Shanmugam (8/9/2012 7:17:00 AM)

    Nice poem. Keep it up.

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  • Sivashanmugam Shanmugam (8/9/2012 7:17:00 AM)

    Keep it up. nice poem.keep it up

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  • Mark Dillon (8/9/2012 7:07:00 AM)

    haven from the hot sun, coolness on a long hot day, softness underfoot, a nice tribute to natures natural protectors.nice write.

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