A Bipoler Moment,89 Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

A Bipoler Moment,89

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ITS 2 in the mourning, im thinking about
my own death, its so easy i think, for me
to end these mood swings, by cutting in
a strait line, and then i pray, again, and again,
but all i see is a bunch of christens, laughing,
and locking all thier doors, .
repent, repent, repent, stand up in fight,
show the world your strong, and can lift
any amount of wieght.
ITS 2 in the mourning, i take a bunch of pills,
sleeping pills, but they dont work, so i take
some thing eles like elevil, still it doesnt
work.
repent, repent, repent, stand up and fight,
show the world your strong, and can lift
any amoint of wieght.............

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Gerardino 11 November 2005

FELLOW poets, a real bipoler moment..........................

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Lee Degnan 07 October 2006

Wow, sad and powerful...

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Ruby Root 16 July 2006

Hi David, This is really sad. I am hoping this was the past because of 89. It really sounded like you had a great deal of stress at the time. I feel very bad for you. I think that life is short enough and we don't need to make it shorter.

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G. Murdock 30 November 2005

Your accessing your base, that is most important.

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Carolyn (Cy) Vuletic 23 November 2005

I hear and feel every word in this piece. Very good, very real, almost too real. Carolyn

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Mary Nagy 11 November 2005

Wow, a very sad moment for you David. Nicely written. Sincerely, Mary

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