A Bird Is Calling Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN
A Bird Is Calling
I hear a bird is there calling
When the snow was falling
''No one hears our lament
We both wander like a dement
We've to find a new shelter
Everything is going to alter
It can make your blood freeze
And may lose e'erything in this breeze
You need to hide your fears under a layer
You will get it from your heart's prayer
And stop wander like a strayer''.............
Great wisdom expressed here, Vipins. The heart's prayer is so important in our life. It is important when we are sad, when we are joyful, when we work, when we rest, when we play, when we are wth friends, when we are lonely, when we give, when we receive, in the morning, in the evening, at night, ... You got me really thinking here, what a wonderful poem.
Bingo! Marvelously done! I like the natural setting of the poem for perfect heart prayer.... I hear a bird is there calling When the snow was falling Meter and rhythm flows along with novelistic ideas in this poem making this more poem poetical! Top marks bloke! Wear these smiles :) :) :) :) ha ha ha!
wow! great! fantastic! What a nice poem is it! Nice words have been used in the poem. The quality of the poem is in its flow, the texture of the poem is knitted well, the theme is fantastic, a very good image has been created.The another quality of the poem is its mystic music. It is a great poem.I like the poem; I enjoyed it while reading too. I am giving you 100/100..Keep it up. And at last I like to thank you for sharing this superb poem among us.
Wow. Wonderful poem...last line too lovely..loved the presentation.. Vipins you are in the Popular Member top on list in Dubai, right...Congrats...
nice write but i think it would sound better if you would make the last line and stop wandering like a strayer. anyway its a good imaginative write
The singing bird is the emblem of new hope.The conflict within one's soul gives rise to optimism.Nice presentation Vipins.
You need to hide your fears under a layer You will get it from your heart's prayer And stop wander like a strayer''............. thats perfect! !
Beautiful poem, and wonderfully expressed... Faith in our own selves can help us see a better tomorrow..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 7:16:17 AM # 1.0.0.1119
A great flowing poem, great work my friend.