A Birthday Song* Poem by The4amPoet ....

A Birthday Song*

Rating: 4.8


</>So today is your Birthday.....
And there's something worth knowing..
I thought long and hard....
About your birthday poem....
God created heaven then earth..
In just seven days..
But took twice as long...
On the mould for your face....
He created the stars...
To place in the skies...
Sent a Recipie to Cadburys...
And they made your Eyes...
Then he went to Da Vinci.....
And stayed for a while..
They sculptured your Body...
And your B-U-Tiful Smile..
Then he travelled to Agra..
And hired the finest tailor there...
He worked for a month..
As he Braided your Hair...
Then god went to Venus....
And she gave you Passion...
An Abundance of Love...
and Aphrodites eye lashes..
Then Ralph Lauren..
Sponsored your skin..
Used Peaches with Cream..
And mixed it all in..
Then god winked and he smiled..
As he gazed at your face..
He added a kind caring nature....
And filled you with grace...
Then he stood back and admired...
at all he'd achieved...
unprecidented Beauty...
That has to be seen...
To be Believed....
...R4R

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I have become speechless so I must like it! ! (~: :

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Sally Plumb Plumb 09 July 2010

Your muse must be a very beautiful woman.

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Ari Lucas 11 May 2011

this is beautiful...and im speechless as were that other person.....its an amazing poem... :)

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Haley Akin 04 August 2011

Wonderful! I'm going to put this in my favorites :)

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Urshula Davis 05 August 2011

This is beautiful! ! ! I almost cried! I love this poem! You're fantastic! ! !

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*BleedingHeart* *Arielle* 03 January 2012

Wow that was amazing i wish i was ur girl but hey who ever it is she is lucky...that was just breath taking great job! ! ! !

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Jinal Oswal 20 October 2011

O God........ I am going gaga over all these poems of yours... Luck gal ;) You are so much in love with her... That is so sweet... I bet she loves you for all these wonders you do... Thank you soo much for inviting me... I am glad I did not miss this lovely, fabulous aah! ! I don't have words to describe... I am loving this: D

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Night Life 27 September 2011

Awesome! On many levels, I loved it all the way through. Gosh, she must have made her Birthday into your Birthday after that ;)

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Stefanie Fontker 18 September 2011

Wow, this is very beautiful. I'm sure your girl enjoyed this poem greatly. I love this, thank you for the invitation.

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Wendelin Weird 06 September 2011

Someday I hope my life may be blessed with someone as wonderfull and thoughtful as you. Fantastic and creative twisted with pure emotions.

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