veeraiyah subbulakshmi


A Bit More! Poem by veeraiyah subbulakshmi


Need a bit more courage not to shed tears,
Seek a bit more patience not to be in anger,
Travel a bit more distance to find the love you require,
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  • Gold Star - 6,950 Points Bri Edwards (1/6/2013 12:41:00 AM)

    man has to go through a bit more evolution to arrive where you and i would like him/her to be. i don't know if man has time left for that. thanks for sharing. and for comment on my poem. bri (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Www. Poemhunter.com/m-d-dinesh-nair-2 (11/13/2012 5:16:00 AM)

    But the things are laid up for a show and it is now very late for most of us to set things right. A piece with an appealing charm. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,229 Points Thomas A Robinson (11/12/2012 7:39:00 AM)

    A look back into times past. we see only fools rush in
    But looking into the future time waits for no man
    and opportunities gained are never opportunities lost (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Greg Uhan (11/11/2012 10:13:00 PM)

    So beautiful...so true.. really love this, an inspiring write, thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 210 Points Prasanna Kumari (11/11/2012 10:12:00 PM)

    good poem with good message fit for a practical world (Report) Reply

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