Kayse Oberley

Rookie (July 24,1990 / Joplin, Mo)

A Black Hole Of Dark Empty Nothingness - Poem by Kayse Oberley

My world is a black hole of dark empty nothingness,
It rains blood all of the time,
I can't see most of the time,
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Comments about A Black Hole Of Dark Empty Nothingness by Kayse Oberley

  • Rookie Troy Clark (4/24/2008 1:55:00 PM)

    Not bad of a poem but theres much work to be done, Good poem though, with a small amount of diffrent wording, some more enjament, and other stuff, you poem would be pretty good. (Report) Reply

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