A Black Roses Poem by Lovely Sunny

A Black Roses

Rating: 5.0


Roses should smells good
Roses should look beautiful
Roses should make people fall in love
Roses should be very dramatic
for couple who in love

Roses shouldn't look ugly and unpleasant
Roses shouldn't make people feel sad
Roses shouldn't make heartbroken
Roses shouldn't be rude
Roses shouldn't have poison inside

But for Black Roses..
It's really different...
She never said a word..
But when she felt hurt...
No one can stop the poison come out from her mouth
She will make someone who loves her feels hurt

Black Roses...
No one never made mistakes....
I know you feel hurt...
But don't hurt someone who loves you
You are a winner now...
But don't let him feel more depressing with your words
Love him...kiss him... pour him with abundant love...
that i couldn't give...
I believe you can able to do that...

From someone who cares...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 14 June 2009

selective significant diction to gear up the message...wonderful poem..10++

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