A Blank Message Poem by Noorie Ali

wow... so good... loved reading it

silence is not always silences but a sound so loud we cant hear it.

Sometimes a blank message could mean blanking a gun in the blinking of your eye for all connected reasons---Clever is that person who will leave all others blank w/o his trace--well written and feelings are well displayed.Salaam.

Hi Norrie - Welcome to the lovely PH Family. We pick the phone up - nobody answers - we open a letter - nothing - just a balnk page - we open an email - blank - it tells us nothing - it tells us everything. We already love you - in the poetic sense - so yes we would care if you died we would cry at your funeral. Verse Five - SORRY is the hardest word - APOLOGY is the most difficult action - GUILT is awesome. If I bother to phone you - warite to you - text you - of course I LOVE YOU - I just don't know the right words to say or write - but 'I say most when I say nothing at all! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! '. Verase 8 & 9 I know you love me - and I am in love with you which is why I sent the letter. It was not sent by mistake its just that I did not know how to phrase my love - Please forgive me - it is fate - can we start again? Thanks for sharing I hope you like my analysis. I score a ten for structure and content. Love in Poetry - JOHN..

a novel theme, a different stand on a blank message...something beyond read in between the lines.

very clever i like this alot 10+++ very rare i read something and it stays with me.....im still thinking about this