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nimal dunuhinga

Rookie - 105 Points (19, April,1951 / kalubovila East, Sri Lanka)

A blind lover's lament


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  • Rookie - 20 Points Lalitha iyer (7/14/2010 3:21:00 AM)

    Dear friend, I beg to differ from your views.........A partner/mate/companion is not be viewed from the physical sense and material and worldly utility point of view. Every man however he is handicapped or in that case woman is equally enjoyable and worth the company and life as anybody else.... So I am first of all with all immaturity and indignation record my protest.......so the lines shall be read like this: : : : : hope you tolerate my interruption...........as only a dear friend..........i am penning the following........

    He feels her pulsating heart
    through his blind eyes
    and flooding delight
    trickles down his lashes
    he discovers new visions
    deep inside his mansions
    slowly he comes alive
    relishing the sight stemming within.......... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (9/14/2009 1:55:00 AM)

    'and he hears a song like a prayer in a cathedral'. What a beautiful line.
    This one hurt you into poetry.10/10.

    Always your friend,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shashendra Amalshan (5/31/2009 9:57:00 AM)

    yeah nice, poetic lines..thanks...and I know broken hearts are hard to mend, I m whether my heart is ever gonna fix 10+++.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alison Cassidy (3/19/2008 10:56:00 PM)

    A melancholy poem with the simplicity and economy of a haiku. Eloquent and sad. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (Report) Reply

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