Tajudeen Shah

Veteran Poet - 1,393 Points (India.)

A Blissful Write - Poem by Tajudeen Shah

She came stealing in,
Fused in my sense and Soul.
Rain drops still drummed
Over the thick green leaves,
As wet air teased
Wooden window panes.
Power goes off during
Rainy nights, a blessing
For those who engage in
Soulful disputes by the moon!

Whispers made us settle
The arguments of moods.
Her lips moistened, eyes
Lost links to her brain,
It seemed, as she boarded
Wings of winds and waves!

Searched and found a pen,
With quivering fingers
She started a writing,
Until the last dropp of
Ink filled was done!
Ecstatic end of an act
Full of passions, pain
And delights immense.
Intelligence and wisdom
Played not much a role.

Had her first work done
And in dreams waiting
For an auspicious pulse
To publish and feel proud!
Spring-bound gardens
Sing in her praises now,
Rainy Moon-lit nights are,
I See, not far behind! .


Poet's Notes about The Poem

The story of this poem is very simple and evident in this verse. Wish fellow bards gather and make garlands to harness their loves.

Comments about A Blissful Write by Tajudeen Shah

  • Rookie Asif Andalib (12/8/2012 3:24:00 AM)

    Beautiful write. I enjoyed reading it (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,287 Points Xelam Kan™ (12/7/2012 11:22:00 AM)

    Full of passions,
    And delights immense.
    Intelligence and wisdom
    Played not much a role (sure Sir) ...........
    indeed a blissful write and Great penned from a very artistic soul...... sure to be marked with high grades.....inspite of all its charms the most gracious thing of this splendid verification i met is its structure....remarkably run on discourse with fabulous rhyming that tuned melodious like Keats'nightingale or wordsworth prelude.........
    Full of romance and adorned with some sweet fancies
    Making deep imoression on minds and souls.......
    Worthy to be loved.....
    look at the scene....
    Whispers made us settle
    The arguments of moods.
    Her lips moistened, eyes
    Lost links to her brain,
    It seemed, as she boarded
    Wings of winds and waves
    .... Searched and found a pen,
    With quivering fingers
    She started a writing,
    Until the last dropp of
    Ink filled was done!
    mind blowing............ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 7, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, December 7, 2012


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