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a bottle full of love!

This lady is a whore,
Who needs and gives more,
This man is a tomboy,
Who loves to enjoy,
Tempting are the both,
Must open them every night,
The imagination spreads wide,
Where they fly as kites,
The memories are wiped out little,
The truth of the mind not rebut,
Once they are the companion of the bed,
They stay with us until our last breathe,
They need not know the love,
That we have upon them as a dove,
They want our soul, sincerely good,
We are the fools, listening to their woes.

Submitted: Friday, December 21, 2012


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  • M.d Dinesh Nair (12/23/2012 12:09:00 AM)

    A poem that judges the mind and traces the vices of it. But what must win is real love bottled or not!

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  • Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (12/21/2012 11:14:00 PM)

    the nicest poem, in thought and structure. a curvacious beauty

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