A Boundless Lovers Hate Poem by Brad Kellum

A Boundless Lovers Hate

Rating: 5.0


The placement of her hands upon her chin.
Such sweet serenity beneath the skin.
Sublime evil plotting her divine spin.
So easily lain down thoughtless provoke.
Clutching, grabbing, patiently awaiting sensual release.
Peaceful calm ripples across my eyes.
In this last breath of life a glimpse of her milk white thighs.
A smile broadens across my face as dead still I lie.
Darkness encompassing complete, registering my defeat.
The placement of her hands upon her chin.
Staring down at her newest sin.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stephanie Souter 16 December 2008

WOW! ! Beautiful poem! ! Vivid images and good job conecting to the sence' of the reader i give it a 9.5 (i rarely give out realy hight scores like this)

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