A Boy Is Born Poem by Asif Baloch

Sorry friend! All babies are not born to suffer. you have an excellent and succint way of telling things...keep the good work continue sathya narayana

I do appreciate your feeling regarding the birth of a boy, but... A nice poem.

Very strong in its images and message. I had to read this several times before I could start saying anything about it. I missed the significance of this line the first few times, “There’s line circling it With no end.” (Might be better if you add an “a” so that it reads “There’s a line”.) This line circling conveys to me the idea that what happens here in some way effects many others, in fact probably, everybody else. I am inclined to be thinking of this boy as not just applying to you as an individual but as having a religious significance; more specifically, the Christ. Your title immediately projects the Christmas Scene. Well written, very vivid images and thought provoking and stirs up feelings.

A VERY emotional poem. U get 10++ Thanks for your nice comments on my poem At Sixes &Sevens

great poem, so much emotion in one poem- well done :)

What a gift we have been given, how many turn away from it with out concern. A good poem and a reminder of what has been given us..

This boy can grow up and be anything he wants to be and live in a world of hope anywhere in the world. Keep writing and sharing your thoughts with us. A '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

And he will be worthy of his suffering no doubt. Fine write.