A Boys Story Poem by Ahtivah Lawton

A Boys Story

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(Just inspired by experiences of others and my surroundings)

They see on the first glance and began to ake strategies to get into that girls pants.
They operate, stratergize and hallucinate their alternative ways and see what kind of girls could they get in a number count of days.
Not even tryna to get to kno her capacities, knoweledge of her AP's or her intuition of her feminine complexities.
But remember this is a boys story, not tryna put a solitaire diamond on her left ring finger and marrying her every thought..but rather get sexually and physically intellectually incline and not tryna to figure out whats in a girls bright mind.
To find a good man is one of a kind..the one that tells you that he love from a good frame of mind.
Not thinking about pleasure to an unwanted measure but thinking about how amazingly devine she is..how one of a Kind she is!
So again a boys story is....They see you on the first glance and began to make strategies on how to get into that girls pants........
But a MAN's story is...They see you on the first glance and began to make stratergies on how to put a juicy diamond on your left hand.
He got to love her..yesterday when she was sleeping he counted 84 lashes on her upper right eye..man do he adore her!
Now this is a mans story..not that little juvenile BOYS STORY!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 August 2009

finger and marrying her every thought...this evry individual man may think interms of girl for marrying...lovely write....10 read mine individual...anywhere and butterflies around..

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~ Jon London ~ 06 July 2009

I think it pays in life to be street wise...I like the way you've gone about this piece...there's a lot of truth within......keep penning and expressing..you have a gift

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Brooke Luchich 05 July 2009

So true. Great poem =)

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Ahtivah Lawton

Ahtivah Lawton

Brooklyn, New York
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