A Breathtaking Fantasy Poem by Justine Keaton

A Breathtaking Fantasy

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My dearest, here I am planning
a trip down the lane to the sea,
in August as the sun is shining
and you're there to comfort me.
A breathtaking fantasy.

Over the fields we will ramble
picking fruit from God's bramble
soft fruit for jelly & blackberry pie,
oh happy day ~ sing I, sing I,
as my eyes point up to the sky.

We should be well-nourished
with His gift of the purest,
edible berries, and vitamin 'C'
giving us strength and vitality,
ever to be in love you see.

My dearest, here I am planning
a breathtaking trip to the sea,
down lover's lane so beguiling,
berries will grow wild and free.
A breathtaking fantasy.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 10 November 2007

Dream on Justine! While your heart is light, the words will flow like wine from your pen. love, Allie xxxx

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 10 November 2007

Awww Justine it brings to mind hot late summer days, made for love...10

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