! ! ! ! ! ! ! A Brief Respite- Senryu! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Mamta Agarwal
! ! ! ! ! ! ! A Brief Respite- Senryu! ! ! ! ! !
One sweltering day,
Wind howls, trees fall; it rains
White pellets- Hail, storm!
I really like the extremes of heat and hail storm in this haiku. Very well chosen words to bring in powerful atmosphere. 10 Karin Anderson
One sweltering day, Wind howls, trees fall; it rains White pellets- Hail, storm! awesome 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Love to hear raindrops and see hail pelting the windowglass. The drama is pleasing. If the storm is not too severe. Very vivid, Mamta. Warm regards, Sandra
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4/25/2024 1:42:53 AM # 1.0.0.1119
a picture of the weather there