Amitie Abedi

Rookie - 60 Points (09 July 1987 / Samba(Democratic Rep. Of Congo))

A Bright Star - Poem by Amitie Abedi

 

   A bright star

 

 

Darling, I'm madly in love

With you that I'm above

The planet and the sky

And without wings I fly

Extremely high…

 

You are my happiness! ! !

I don't know how to express

The tenderness, joy

And flavor I usually enjoy

Which actually destroy

 

My sore that's sharp like a knife,

You bring into my life.

I can fight harder than a knight

To make you pretty girl my wife.

 

Can you fill up the empty place

In my heart? No one can replace

You as my life has been so bright

Since I knew you. You bring light

 

In my dark and sorrow soul. I pray

God to make you mine every day

And to enable us not to betray

The precious fruit (a rare ingot) ,

This treasure we have got

Without requirement of any pay.

 

Darling, I'm madly in love

With you that I'm above

The planet and the sky

And without wings I fly

Extremely high…

 

I promise to comfort you dear,

To wipe your sharp tears

When needed, I think you hear

 

Me! Further more, I would assure  

You when you are in fears,

My feelings are endless and pure.

 

Darling, I'm madly in love

With you that I'm above

The planet and the sky

And without wings I fly

Extremely high…

 

 

I want each morning your head in my chest

Absorbing the first and fresh atmosphere

Of a new day. Oh Dear God, she is the best

 

And the only one who can fit in my sphere.

Would you God consider my request?

I need your hand to be always with her.

 

If I could speak to birds singing wonderful

Melodies in my garden, I would beg them

To go and sing at your windows the poem,

The one I wrote to describe how delightful

 

I find you and to let you also know

That I will never hurt you, or let you go.

 

Darling, I'm madly in love

With you that I'm above

The planet and the sky

And without wings I fly

Extremely high…

 

I will never let anyone take

You away, because you belong

To me sweetheart. You make

Me really happy and so strong

That they think it is wrong.

 

You're that precious, rare treasure

Which brings smile and pleasure.

You are a mild candle and bright

Star in my life which delight

My world and erase my blight.

 

Darling, I'm madly in love

With you that I'm above

The planet and the sky

And without wings I fly

Extremely high.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

To all lovers

Comments about A Bright Star by Amitie Abedi

  • Gold Star - 27,359 Points Chinedu Dike (9/27/2014 7:11:00 AM)

    A poem written from the heart. Lovely. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 10,270 Points Lyn Paul (8/15/2014 7:26:00 PM)

    Romance is shining strong in your heart and you have expressed this beautifully with a star. Thank you (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 21 Points Suman Kumar Das (7/13/2014 2:33:00 AM)

    so loving lines....dear! ...............liked it (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 13, 2014

Poem Edited: Sunday, July 13, 2014


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