A Bright Tomorrow Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

A Bright Tomorrow

Rating: 4.6


I don’t know how to work for better tomorrow
What are the rules that I have to follow?
How the thing to be allowed and grow?
No disturbances in life still nicely to flow

Mind doesn’t work in that direction
I wish to take no hasty action
Life seems full of uncertainties
One has to remain contended with varieties

It is always fine to move with great speed
You must remain healthy with good food and feed
Honest approach without any greed
Certainly to grow a fine plant from quality seed

No one is sure of what is in store
There should be no let up in efforts to explore
Even in difficulties try to salvage and land at shore
Think of another stage and try to act before

Result may not be fruitful or sign of encouragement
Life should be made full of movements
Ready to strike at any given time or moment
To accept the fate smilingly without offering any comment

I may not yield to pressure and allow the things to worsen
The difficulties may come on the way unforeseen
I may wish to cry by hiding the face under pillow
I shall be prepared for worst situation and bitter pills to swallow

Sun was blazing all the way
Striking heat waves with direct rays
Forcing people to find shelter on the way
but not letting any opportunity to pass or giving away

Have you learned about people who work under the sun?
They work continuously but don’t ask for anything or run
it is difficult o stand under direct waves at afternoon
They think it may pass off very soon

I had learnt about one farm laborer,
He looked to me as torch bearer
Sun was on top but he was sweating and singing
He has all the joy while digging;

I dared not to ask him “Will you eat some food? ”
It is nicely prepared, fresh and good,
”No dear sir” I am very sorry,
I earn sufficient and food is no worry,




I am able to make it today and so no need to accept or borrow
Today you are there but who will offer me tomorrow?
The reply saddened me for the moment and sent shock wave
what an answer or gesture? I really felt shame and couldn’t believe

Who can be considered as an ideal philosopher?
The person who has no knowledge of others
Or who consider themselves as great personality?
We can think positively about the fine blend and quality

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Koby Moore 15 June 2010

That was really deep good job =) Hey can you or anyone else who reads this comment come read my poems I'm kinda new to this and would really enjoy what you think on them Thanks, Koby

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 21 June 2010

‘Life seems full of uncertainties/One has to remain contended with varieties’…Sir always you decor corpus of poetry with nuggets …some places I find diamonded nuggets …love it most much…quoted above… thanks for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 September 2010

It is nicely prepared, fresh and good, ”No dear sir” I am very sorry, I earn sufficient and food is no worry,

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Darshna Chopra 04 August 2010

I don’t know how to work for better tomorrow What are the rules that I have to follow? How the thing to be allowed and grow? .... nice to dream....10

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Baru Gobira 25 July 2010

Each moment a lifetime. A thoughtful poem.-Baru Gobira

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Chand Shikari 11 July 2010

don’t know how to work for better tomorrow What are the rules that I have to follow? How the thing to be allowed and grow? it has to be bright future....10

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Malaya Roses 22 June 2010

Sun was blazing all the way Striking heat waves with direct rays Forcing people to find shelter on the way but not letting any opportunity to pass or giving away I am very agree with what written in your poem. Sometimes reality of human atitude, action and reaction are actually chain of what been seen, learned and adopted thru sweet or bitter life experience. Well written and almast accurate with what actually happening to human nowdays. 10 for reality poem.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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