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A Broken Heart

Where the ends of life meet
A boundary is broken
Overstepped and outreached
Another creed spoken...

This is the end for me
And that''s why it is
Truly a beginning
As one for both of us...

Have there ever doubts?
I cannot remember
Anything saved that night
Two years since December...

All that you offered me
Every happiness
Has been my disbelief
That I should be so blessed...

But still you are asking
That I stay by your side
And so entirely
When you broke my heart
And tarnished my pride...


COPY WRITE©2009

Submitted: Monday, August 17, 2009
Edited: Monday, October 29, 2012

Comments about this poem (A Broken Heart by Romeo Della Valle )

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  • Rosalyn Grohol (5/10/2013 9:37:00 AM)

    This poem is very heart warming.

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  • Elizabeth Padillo Olesen (11/4/2012 4:34:00 PM)

    Delightful read, Romeo. You are here actiing like the real Romeo, in love and hurt and still willing to love.

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  • Lynn Stillman (7/27/2012 12:20:00 PM)

    Romeo, this so beautifully written and your words had the power to make me feel your pain.

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  • Pooja Shanbhag (5/26/2012 12:44:00 AM)

    Beautiful...lovely poem... :)

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  • Reginald Francois (4/24/2012 1:21:00 PM)

    I like this one I could picture what he is going through keep up the good work

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  • Wahab Abdul (4/9/2012 9:35:00 PM)

    the end is the beginning a philosophical line.........very inspirational...................

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  • Oreoluwa Temmy (3/26/2012 4:18:00 AM)

    nice poem...i love it so much
    sorry for the broken heart

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  • Sri Tatsat (3/19/2012 4:50:00 PM)

    Lovely work! Beautiful flow :)

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  • Fragments Of Light And Love (2/27/2012 9:22:00 AM)

    you have made a real thing concrete in your words...this is an excellent write. i admire this peotry.

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  • Ronald Grayson (2/22/2012 7:54:00 AM)

    This a very good poem I loved the way it flowed, and spoke right to you

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