A Broken Heart ~ Poem by M. Asim Nehal

A Broken Heart ~

Rating: 5.0


Her heart is once again broken
Not due to failed love
But by the separation
Of the loved ones
And this is what a war can do
The morning calmness
Chirping of the birds
Bells from the farthest school on a hill
Bustling of the leaves
Farmers sowing seeds
And the river flows carefree
All in few minutes turned upside down
As the fighter jet flew past dropping bombs
And then tankers rushed in to capture.
The tree fell, building broken, smoke everywhere
The blue sky turned dark black
And the river carrying hands, legs and heads
With a photo album sits a teen girl
Looking around for the loved ones.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 03 March 2022

Oop, sad love! A poignant poem so neatly composed...5 stars.

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Nabakishore Dash 04 March 2022

Very Nice and excellent poem.

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Nabakishore Dash 04 March 2022

Intelligent write.

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Tihama Hykam 04 March 2022

Great picture of war in words.

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Unnikrishnan E S 04 March 2022

Five stars for this well-motivated write.

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Unnikrishnan E S 04 March 2022

That is how war cripples the society. The people. As Senator Lindsey Graham has exhorted the Russian Public, someone should exterminate the enemy of peace, enemy of the world, the devil

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