A Broken Heart Thief Poem by Akhtar Jawad

A Broken Heart Thief

Rating: 5.0


Yes, I am a broken heart,
I don't know how I'm still beating!
From you I learned a wonderful art,
you taught me this beautiful cheating!
Thanks my friends for teaching me the art,
how to act and react and play my part.

Well done my friends you gave me few strains,
I am related to persons who're grieved,
not my friends, my relatives of pains,
see the smiles, how nicely relieved!
I don't make friends I have lost my belief,
but can't ignore a broken heart thief.

Wednesday, November 11, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: relationships
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 11 November 2015

There is different sequence in broken heart. Sometimes this sequence is wisely expressed. The art of learning to breath is fantastic definitely with nice belief. Wonderfully drafted and shared poem definitely. Nice sharing.10

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Bipasha D 15 June 2018

I can relate to these situations...

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Uzefa Rashida M.a 24 February 2016

Jawad sahib! You do have your own way with your words and a love for poems. A lovely poem and thought provoking one.

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M Asim Nehal 12 November 2015

Heartfelt poem.........Nicely written Janab.

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Loke Kok Yee 12 November 2015

we are all playing that part in our own ways thank you-10

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Kelly Kurt 11 November 2015

A relatable poem, Akhtar. Thanks

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