a butterfly girl!

I am a butterfly girl,
With beautiful frills,
Of printed designs,
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  • Chandra Thiagarajan (12/23/2012 6:01:00 AM)

    Nice personification of the butterfly. The description is resplendent and the poem captures the heart.

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  • Pradip Chattopadhyay (12/21/2012 1:26:00 AM)

    Portrayed so graphically that I can see it.10.

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  • Scotty Dogg (12/20/2012 10:30:00 AM)

    You got it nailed. Poetry is about images and you get it. Nice job!

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  • Sallam Yassin (12/20/2012 9:42:00 AM)

    let whole world be your flowers field
    nice poem

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