A Candle Material Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

A Candle Material

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The heart is made of candle material
It burns to give light in general
This is what the impression we carry
It has tears in joy, happiness and with worry

This is the only sensible part which reacts
It obeys to normal happenings and sharply acts
It is instant and no delay action is awaited
It role is appreciated and clearly stated

It has fear of any time being extinguished
The whole gamut of exercise can be finished
But the ultimate pain can go no where
It has to be retained and felt here

No one knows what kind of piece it is?
How does all function assigned like this?
No one reacts except eyes being close to scene?
The tears have to come out even if want to be unseen

It has to dramatize its role in all the circumstances
It has not failed or discouraged in any instances
Time has come one not a dropp of tear was shed
It was only when there was realization of being misled

It has no time for grief when felt upon being cheated
It has no role when there is altercation and discussion heated
It has nothing to express in anger when love is in back seat
People are in rage and there is no time to think or greet

The role under such condition has its own effect
All other parts may have dominance and be in driver’s seat
What heart has to do when there is complete love lost?
It has to hide in the remote corner as there remains no trust

Love and hate can not remain side by side and go together
They can’t have any synchronization or scope to bother
If one is needed extremely then others has to make a way
Love has to be retained at any cost and hate can be pushed away

There is no such sensitive device developed anywhere
It is sensational and important part to have been gifted from there
Almighty wanted human being to be sensitive to some reversals
Else it was feared that people may not be in position to face the dismissals


We are thankful for being in possession
We are heartfelt and always remain happy with obsession
It has all sort of mechanism to make us laugh or cry
It has different shades on face when in complete shy

It has fear of being any tine extinguished
The whole gamut of exercise can be finished
But the ultimate pain can go no where
It has to be retained and felt here

No one knows what kind of piece it is?
How does all function assigned like this?
No one reacts except eyes being close to scene?
The tears have to come out even if want to be unseen

It has to dramatize its role in all the circumstances
It has not failed or discouraged in any instances
Time has come one not a dropp of tear was shed
It was only when there was realization of being misled

It has no time for grief when felt upon being cheated
It has no role when there is altercation and discussion heated
It has nothing to express in anger when love is in back seat
People are in rage and there is no time to think or greet

The role under such condition has its own effect
All other parts may have dominance and be in driver’s seat
What heart has to do when there is complete love lost?
It has to hide in the remote corner as there remains no trust

Love and hate can not remain side by side and go together
They can’t have any synchronization or scope to bother
If one is needed extremely then others has to make a way
Love has to be retained at any cost and hate can be pushed away

There is no such sensitive device developed anywhere
It is sensational and important part to have been gifted from there
Almighty wanted human being to be sensitive to some reversals
Else it was feared that people may not be in position to face the dismissals

We are thankful for being in possession
We are heartfelt and always remain happy with obsession
It has all sort of mechanism to make us laugh or cry
It has different shades on face when in complete shy

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jenny Gordon 17 February 2011

Very interesting, fascinating, intriguing. On the one hand God says, 'the spirit of man is the candle of the Lord, searching all the inward parts of the belly....' and on the other, He specifically says, 'the heart is deceitful above all things, and desperately wicked: who can know it? I the Lord search the heart, I try the reins, even to give every man according to his ways, and according to the fruit of his doings.' Therefore I hear the initial analysis of the heart being like a candle, and yet you have presented it seemingly with something of a purity which I do not believe it has. This is quite the contemplation, and I enjoyed your point about it being not exactly something we can put a finger on, so to speak, for the pumping organ has not the responsibility to which we are herein alluding. Again very fascinating. I rather enjoyed it.

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Jenny Gordon 15 February 2011

Very interesting, fascinating, intriguing. On the one hand God says, 'the spirit of man is the candle of the Lord, searching all the inward parts of the belly....' and on the other, He specifically says, 'the heart is deceitful above all things, and desperately wicked: who can know it? I the Lord search the heart, I try the reins, even to give every man according to his ways, and according to the fruit of his doings.' Therefore I hear the initial analysis of the heart being like a candle, and yet you have presented it seemingly with something of a purity which I do not believe it has. This is quite the contemplation, and I enjoyed your point about it being not exactly something we can put a finger on, so to speak, for the pumping organ has not the responsibility to which we are herein alluding. Again very fascinating. I rather enjoyed it.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 14 February 2011

Very well said that the heart is made of the candle material. The poem is very deep in meaning. I loved to read it.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 February 2011

We are thankful for being in possession We are heartfelt and always remain happy with obsession It has all sort of mechanism to make us laugh or cry It has different shades on face when in complete shy

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