A Candle Of Tears Poem by Vimal Kumar N

A Candle Of Tears

Rating: 3.1


A broken heart speaks love in every piece,

but the pieces of my heart speak about you,

the darkness tries to invade and dethrone my love,

but the light of love keeps glowing

and I'm the candle who melts,

thousands of beautiful faces but very few beautiful hearts,

diamonds do look so shining,

but truly they were black,

life though looks fancy but it is nothing but a tickling clock,

faces wither with time but not love,

because love is an eternal magic that time can never reveal,

when my heart is mended, I'll let you know,

even then you want to tear it, tell me slow,

because your hands may get hurt, so I'll do it for you..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Inner Whispers 11 April 2009

poignant writings...need time to read all yours...i will be back...thanks, my pleasure to read from yours...

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Very nice poem-so broken hearted yet very strong.A ten from me.....

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Catrina Heart 30 March 2009

Such a touching piece, poignancy was felt all throughout...great similes and metaphors used, and the soft words used added sadness in your tone....lovely penned....10......Thanks! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 'WELCOME TO THE PH FAMILY'..........keep writing! ! !

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