A Captive Wing Poem by abhimanyu kumar.s
A Captive Wing
Never before I imagined,
Pushed down and removed,
As suddenly it raised in my actions,
Pushing me slowly and silently.
Ask the missing owls,
And the dark nights,
For I get dumb departed,
To the mysterious elements of love.
Few cracks and sparks,
With rocket speed pierce,
Forming substance in my distance,
Ceiling my imagination over searches.
Perceptions and distress treatments,
All at a naked eye and my life.
this poem is superb and you have good way of putting up your feelings.10
This is really good! I love these poems too, I love your writing style.
Perceptions and distress treatments All at a naked eye and life. A thoughtful poem.
Every single line is written wonderfully, but each line feels un-connected to the next line and there is no unity in the poem. I will read another poem by you and comment. I hope to see a more togethor poem.
Wow Impressive, I love the rythm. Amazing talent you have, what a gift. Go on! Keep going & don't stop, reach for the stars! :)
Never before I imagined Pushed down and removed Suddenly it raised in my actions the people in our life makes us put our best foot forward...as a poet you do just that...the mind is a wonder of wonders as is your writing...GREAT!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Here the feelings are not revealed, yet the desire is overpassing all the being of the lover. Until the emotions are expressed aloud, this love remains unreachable/forbidden/infantuated/mute. The lover is like a peeping tom without malice. I like this poem a lot! Keep-on aspiring and sharing your compo.