abhimanyu kumar.s (31.12.1988 / venkatgiri kota)

poet abhimanyu kumar.s
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A Captive Wing

Never before I imagined
Pushed down and removed
Suddenly it raised in my actions
Pushing slowly and silently
Ask the missing owls and dark nights
How I get dumb departed
From such mysterious elements of love.

Few cracks and sparks
With rocket speed pierce and
Form a substance in my distance
Far it goes in her proceedings
Ceiling my imagination over searches
Perceptions and distress treatments
All at a naked eye and life.

abhimanyu kumar.s
Submitted: Saturday, October 29, 2011
Edited: Saturday, October 29, 2011

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  • Diasia Sims (3/17/2012 1:32:00 PM)

    Wow Impressive, I love the rythm. Amazing talent you have, what a gift. Go on! Keep going & don't stop, reach for the stars! :)

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  • Whisperkwane Lamb (3/8/2012 3:06:00 AM)

    Never before I imagined
    Pushed down and removed
    Suddenly it raised in my actions the people in our life makes us put our best foot forward...as a poet you do just that...the mind is a wonder of wonders as is your writing...GREAT!

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  • Jerry Buckley (1/26/2012 3:26:00 PM)

    Nice flow... vivid words... strong talent here

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  • Virginia Pecho Gely (1/14/2012 10:47:00 AM)

    Here the feelings are not revealed, yet the desire is overpassing all the being of the lover. Until the emotions are expressed aloud, this love remains unreachable/forbidden/infantuated/mute. The lover is like a peeping tom without malice. I like this poem a lot! Keep-on aspiring and sharing your compo.

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  • Divya Divya B (11/14/2011 1:35:00 AM)

    well in captivating her as well as the readers.10

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  • Emily Gurdon (11/9/2011 3:45:00 AM)

    This is really good! I love these poems too, I love your writing style.

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  • lover of poetry sweet (11/7/2011 5:17:00 AM)

    this poem is superb and you have good way of putting up your feelings.10

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  • grame peele (11/2/2011 2:55:00 AM)

    a well constructed sonnet on love. brilliant

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