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Myrtle Thomas
(8/16/2009 2:54:00 PM) |
Carol this is a wonderful way to look at the weather, what a great thought to see the wind as smiles! That would be so wonderful I think you have created a very unique piece as I have never heard anyone else describe the wind in this way.What a grand world it would be to see smiles this way.YOU MADE ME SMILE.Thanks I needed this.
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Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty
(8/16/2009 2:25:00 PM) |
'rain that is warm
feels like a hug'
Excellent romantic imagery!
Romanticism with Nature.
Ten
dr. sakti
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Rehana Nazli
(8/9/2009 4:05:00 PM) |
A poem with the message of warmth. Relationship between smell and smiles, rain and warm hugs...what a beautiful imagery. It is melodious Carol.
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C. P. Sharma
(8/8/2009 7:59:00 AM) |
Carol, This is superb.
I can smell the sweet fragrance of smiles
And the hope that takes a thousand miles.
CP
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Indira Renganathan
(8/8/2009 4:56:00 AM) |
Short and effective words...and I like
'hope
it is there
interweaving with
the smiles '...thank you
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Karin Anderson
(8/7/2009 8:01:00 AM) |
Light, bright and breezy Carol. I love 'smells like a million smiles running around laughing'.
Well done! 10
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Sarwar Chowdhury
(8/5/2009 11:13:00 AM) |
Fine wording that created sweet picto which very near to post modern poetry!
10++
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Ramesh T A
(8/5/2009 8:17:00 AM) |
Chang and rain are great relief after a long drought!
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