(31st, December,1970 / Khulna, Bangladesh)

poet Musfiq us Shaleheen
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A Commitment to Love

A little say to you, my darling-
You don't come and love me
I can't commit you as because
I am not alone, I loved thee-
A millions of patriotic heart,
are hopefully waiting for me
And I have been hearing thee,
voices from dawn to till night-
They are calling me as slam-bang,
with a same lyric and melody
As like as a national anthem,
is sang as sonorous by together thee
Darling, I can love thy if you love thee
If you come and go with me there
and sing a song what they are singing
I commit you that I will be with you
forever and ever-

- Shaleheen,3rd March,2013

Submitted: Saturday, March 02, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, March 05, 2013

Poet's Notes about The Poem

if you love thee i will love you- A commitment for love

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  • Nader Baheri (3/16/2013 4:24:00 AM)

    bravo.nicely penned.
    i think i commented this before for another poe.love must be bilatteral.if its not it will be changed to either hatred or not.
    but commitment for love is so admirable.
    welldone~nb

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  • Kelvin Owusu (3/15/2013 9:46:00 AM)

    wonderful piece of poetry well done

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  • S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (3/9/2013 10:48:00 AM)

    Nice poem, a lil bit seemingly with a touch of satire. Am back only now after travel n i enjoyd readin dis.

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  • Hazel Evelyn Durham (3/9/2013 5:59:00 AM)

    A serenade of love, hope and dignity!

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  • Vizard Dhawan (3/9/2013 2:42:00 AM)

    nicely written..heart touching...well done fellow poet...hats off

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  • Gulsher John (3/7/2013 8:35:00 PM)

    A sweet love song from a passionate heart

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  • Madina Morris (3/7/2013 4:43:00 PM)

    Nicely done. It was very...how do you say...likable ;)

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  • Payal Parande (3/7/2013 11:32:00 AM)

    amazing....such a romantic piece you have created...........bravo sir, well done

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  • Mohammad Skati (3/5/2013 11:24:00 PM)

    HI.GOOD POET.I LOVED YOUR POEM VERY MUCH.YOU WRITE WELL.YOUR POETRY IS SO GOOD.THANKS.

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  • Vivek Tiwari (3/5/2013 9:38:00 PM)

    Positive love poem and great commitment for your love.
    Love develops on such grounds of faith and trust.

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