A Commitment To Love Poem by Musfiq us shaleheen

A Commitment To Love

Rating: 4.1


A little say to you,
my darling-
You don't come and love me
I can't commit you
as because, as because
I am not alone,
I loved thee-
A millions of
patriotic hearts are hopefully
waiting for me
And I have been hearing
thee voices from dawn
to till night-
They are calling me
as slam-bang with a same
lyric and melody
As like as a national anthem,
is sang as sonorous by together thee
Darling, I can love thy
if you love thee
If you come and go with me there
and sing a song
what they are singing
I commit you
that I will be with you
forever and ever-

- Shaleheen,3rd March,2013

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
if you love thee i will love you- A commitment for love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Payal Parande 07 March 2013

amazing....such a romantic piece you have created...........bravo sir, well done

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Hazel Durham 09 March 2013

A serenade of love, hope and dignity!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 09 March 2013

Nice poem, a lil bit seemingly with a touch of satire. Am back only now after travel n i enjoyd readin dis.

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Vivek Tiwari 05 March 2013

Positive love poem and great commitment for your love. Love develops on such grounds of faith and trust.

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Mohammad Skati 05 March 2013

HI.GOOD POET.I LOVED YOUR POEM VERY MUCH.YOU WRITE WELL.YOUR POETRY IS SO GOOD.THANKS.

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Chinedu Dike 29 July 2019

Well expressed thoughts and feelings nicely brought forth from the heart. Thanks for sharing, Musfiq.

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Abduhoo Salamath 23 August 2016

wonderful...and nice written...thanks for sharing

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Howard Savage 27 January 2016

Great poem of love, what's profound about it deals with commitment. Love can get you committed.

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Nader Baheri 16 March 2013

bravo.nicely penned. i think i commented this before for another poe.love must be bilatteral.if its not it will be changed to either hatred or not. but commitment for love is so admirable. welldone~nb

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Kelvin Owusu 15 March 2013

wonderful piece of poetry well done

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