Musfiq us shaleheen

Freshman - 923 Points (31st, December,1970 / Khulna, Bangladesh)

A Commitment to Love


A little say to you, my darling-
You don't come and love me
I can't commit you as because
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Topic of this poem: Love



Poet's Notes about The Poem

if you love thee i will love you- A commitment for love

Comments about this poem (A Commitment to Love by Musfiq us shaleheen )

  • Rookie - 4 Points Nader Baheri (3/16/2013 4:24:00 AM)

    bravo.nicely penned.
    i think i commented this before for another poe.love must be bilatteral.if its not it will be changed to either hatred or not.
    but commitment for love is so admirable.
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  • Rookie - 126 Points Kelvin Owusu (3/15/2013 9:46:00 AM)

    wonderful piece of poetry well done (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,085 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (3/9/2013 10:48:00 AM)

    Nice poem, a lil bit seemingly with a touch of satire. Am back only now after travel n i enjoyd readin dis. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,898 Points Hazel Durham (3/9/2013 5:59:00 AM)

    A serenade of love, hope and dignity! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 175 Points Vizard Dhawan (3/9/2013 2:42:00 AM)

    nicely written..heart touching...well done fellow poet...hats off (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,083 Points Xelam Kan (3/7/2013 8:35:00 PM)

    A sweet love song from a passionate heart (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Madina Morris (3/7/2013 4:43:00 PM)

    Nicely done. It was very...how do you say...likable ;) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (3/7/2013 11:32:00 AM)

    amazing....such a romantic piece you have created...........bravo sir, well done (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,067 Points Mohammad Skati (3/5/2013 11:24:00 PM)

    HI.GOOD POET.I LOVED YOUR POEM VERY MUCH.YOU WRITE WELL.YOUR POETRY IS SO GOOD.THANKS. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 98 Points Vivek Tiwari (3/5/2013 9:38:00 PM)

    Positive love poem and great commitment for your love.
    Love develops on such grounds of faith and trust. (Report) Reply

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