# A Communication Gap Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# A Communication Gap

Rating: 4.8


In todays technological uptrend
we have the world within our hand
a network could take us all around

A gap within ourselves at hand
no technology could do to mend
a gap between the heart and mind

A dangerous gap at hand
it engulfs the soul in deep sand
no technology yet could mend

The heart would cry out for the world
the mind is petty and cold
not very far from each other the two ends

the mind is the ' doer'
the heart is the 'teller'
the mind prefers not to be a listener

soul rules the heart
fear rules the mind
conscience is the real communicator

CONSCIENCE IS THE TRUE COMMUNICATION TOO

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 08 June 2009

'soul rules the heart fear rules the mind' Truly expressed: there is gap- heart and mind. A nice poem composed on mind's eye.

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Joseph Poewhit 08 June 2009

Sort of like a shield or a sterile communications. No real human contact.

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Sandra Martyres 08 June 2009

Nice write Samanyan...on an interesting subject..

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Ency Bearis 09 June 2009

amusing write......consequential....

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Carol Gall 09 June 2009

GOOD ONE THE MIND CAN GO WHERE WE DONT WANT TO

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Duh Huh 22 June 2009

Thought provoking poem. If the conscience is strong enough it can also be a guiding beacon. Very well done. Thank you for sharing. :)

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Maitreyee Joshi 20 June 2009

the truth about todays world.true, i like it.thanks10

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Miriam Maia Padua 13 June 2009

mindful, heartfelt write... sends us a great meaning... with truth on the reality of our feelings of ourselves... a piece to make us reflect... thanks for sharing your beautiful insights... _maia_

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rago rago 10 June 2009

a communication gap is the worst of all which make the egoist senses on us to play....... we fall and never raise our heads....... your poem certainly brought a meaning.........

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Fay Slimm 10 June 2009

This verse has seeds of truth which I heartedly endorse....... the mind has to be controlled then we are the master and the heart can become itself - -we often get this gap between, - - which you aptly wrote about...... thank you 10/10 from Fay.

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