Treasure Island

lady grace


A confession to you


''wash away the thoughts in me. keeps my mind away from you. no more pride, no more tears....sorry are all I have to do…weep are born but always hide....tears for me, it will not dry....magnify the solitude within...when will it fades and totally die? ''

in the silence of the night
memories played my brain
like dew it refreshes
in my unconscious, it quietly drains...

water can’t wet the thirsty lips
nor pouring rain quench starving soul
I am captured and felt my self surrender
whenever I hear you call....

no strong winds can calm my dreams
on how i wish to see your smiles
hope one day, sky will fall into the sea
so i could see how stars kiss the waves
and rest quietly the whole night...

Submitted: Sunday, February 21, 2010
Edited: Thursday, March 11, 2010

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  • Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (2/25/2010 2:48:00 AM)

    Indeed very good write feeling refreshment …doused

    ‘…I am captured and felt my self surrender…’

    This line I mu mu mu [enjoy] muchhhh
    10++
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK (Report) Reply

  • Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (2/25/2010 2:48:00 AM)

    Indeed very good write feeling refreshment …doused

    ‘…I am captured and felt my self surrender…’

    This line I mu mu mu [enjoy] muchhhh
    10++
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK (Report) Reply

  • Eyan Desir (2/22/2010 2:50:00 PM)

    fine poetic lines
    tender emotions of the heart
    well express on the screen... (Report) Reply

  • Ravi Sathasivam (2/22/2010 4:46:00 AM)

    'no strong winds can calm my dreams
    on how i wish to see your smiles
    hope one day, sky will fall into the sea
    so i could see how stars kiss the waves
    and rest quietly the whole night... '
    What a beautiful poem. Well penned
    Enjoyed reading it
    Thanks for sharing with me (Report) Reply

  • C. P. Sharma (2/22/2010 2:00:00 AM)

    Your confession is the perfect dedication.

    Break, Break, Break
    All my thoughts O sea,
    So that my thoughts
    Ever fall upon Thee,
    So that in bliss
    I ever remain
    And Name becomes
    My sole refrain.

    CP (Report) Reply

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