A Consumptive Coolie's Gossamer Daughter Poem by nimal dunuhinga

Again Nimal, I learned alot of new words reading your poem. After looking them up in the dictionary. 'You know that's the story of my life, I don't have much education but I read alot of books. when I find the definition of a word it gives a whole new light on the subject'

This is another brilliant slice of life from you my friend; a definate fable poem but we are left to find the moral ourselve beautifuly written in the language that you have a personal ownership claim on.

Nimal, Your use of the language is unique and very beautiful. There is a singsong quality to it that I have not quite seen anywhere else. You bring a delightfully colorful qulaity to the ordinary aspects of daily life. Well done, my friend. Don

A well scriptyed piece Nimal....I like the Language you utelize, as well as the even-flow structure..''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

If we look beyond our own expectations of others then we may see so much more Love duncan X

Another fascinating parable, Nimal from your fertile imagination. Love the title and the word gossamer to describe the daughter. I'm producing The Willow Pattern Plate at the moment. In that story, the emperor builds a wall around the palace to stop his daughter eloping with the gardener. Unfortunately for the emperor, his wall doesn't stop the pair eloping. But that's another story... love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Another fascinating story written from your own unique perspective on life. Take care, Nimal. Kind regards, Sandra