# A ' Creation''s' Song Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# A ' Creation''s' Song

Rating: 3.5


why search for him
every where
when he is right within me

whether iam a spec or the sea
why search for him
every where
when he is right within me

THE CREATOR WOULD BE IN HIS CREATION

whether iam a spec or the sea
he would be in me
i would show him
in every bit of me
for this whole world to see

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Martyres 06 June 2009

You are right, the creator lives in his creations...good work 10

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Carol Gall 06 June 2009

the creator is in your heart feel him

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Catrina Heart 06 June 2009

A creation's song, a lovely meaningful poem in praise...10+++

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Kesav Easwaran 06 June 2009

soul searching...good concept

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Rajaram Ramachandran 07 June 2009

This is like searching for ghee when butter is in one's hand. Lord Krishna declares in Bhagwad Gita that He is sitting in the heart of everyone. Instead of searching for the Lord inside our heart, we are searching for Him outside everywhere. This is a subjective matter and cannot be realized objectively. A good subject you have handled nicely.

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Maitreyee Joshi 20 June 2009

the creater and the creation has to be one, otherwise there would be no perfection, and the intricasies of this earth proove this.thanks

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Anthony Williams 17 June 2009

so simple but so deep, it felt at peace when i read your poem and thats always a good poem for me.

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Miriam Maia Padua 15 June 2009

very nice poem...so peaceful... a piece that flows with thoughts of wisdom i love this Sam... touching in a way...we can relate it in our life... God is our creator...we just have to find Him..inside us... in our hearts... 10+++ maia

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Pandian Angelina 15 June 2009

An enlightened soul Who lights our path With his wise thoughts In the form of simple poems For us to learn, imbibe And to follow! Sir, Not Samanyan But, a Sage - I presume! regards, Angel

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rago rago 10 June 2009

a beautiful creation with gift in poetic verse .......

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