Mohammad Akmal Nazir

Rookie - 0 Points (Bahraich, U.P. India)

A Crime In The Dark Of Night - Poem by Mohammad Akmal Nazir

Under the cover of the drowsy night,
I see a very painful sight,
On the outskirts of the city,
A crime is born out of pity,
The crime is henious in nature,
Modesty experiences a fracture,
Who are these awesome faces,
I saw on them no traces,
No traces of shame and modesty,
Humanity seems to be void of honesty,
They are waiting for the customers,
They can be both old and new comers,
No job for them is a better substitute,
For each one of them is a prostitute.


Comments about A Crime In The Dark Of Night by Mohammad Akmal Nazir

  • Rookie gordoninayr@googlemail.com inayr (6/23/2011 12:32:00 PM)

    Humanity seems to be void of honesty, this one line, Mohd.
    says a whole page
    as usual you capture truth in humanity (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Sherine El Geziry (6/15/2011 8:17:00 PM)

    This is very true. The description is very tangible though brief. It's as if you have managed to delve deep into their mentality and insides where morals, mildness and virtues no longer exist.. Great piece :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 387 Points Ace Of Black Hearts (6/11/2011 3:31:00 PM)

    A Greatly Depicted Story With The Such Words That I Give This A Ten (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 11 Points Micmac Mccrory (5/13/2011 4:30:00 AM)

    A world-wide phenomenon is prostitution. Suposedly the first profession. A beautiful depiction, great use of words. I wish i could write like this. now i have to up my aspirations. thank you for sharing this poem with me. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie lost soul (5/1/2011 2:26:00 PM)

    nicely written,
    a stylish poetic acccout of the mundane (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Santosh Sharma (4/27/2011 5:57:00 AM)

    A radical thought , painful when night is awaited to chase the customer. Let God shower his grace to take out humanity from henious acts of existence. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 125 Points Romeo Della Valle (4/24/2011 11:18:00 AM)

    There are many reasons for the oldest profession of the world to keep booming throughout time! It is sad situation but we can't do much just pray for those forced or not to engage in it! A well crafted write my friend! Thanks for sharing and Love and Peace for always! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 44 Points Malaya Roses (4/23/2011 5:02:00 AM)

    Prostitution at large and our morality was challenged either to hate them or try to save them.
    Social critique in style of its own.
    well done. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 23, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 21, 2011


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