Lawrence CH Hiun


A Cute Poem For A Cute Girl - Poem by Lawrence CH Hiun

You changed my world with a blink of an eye,
That is something that I can not deny,
You put my soul from worst to best,
That is why I treasure you my dearest Marites.

You just don't know what you have done for me,
You even pushed me to the best that I can be,
You really are an angel sent from above,
To take care of me and shower with love.

When I'm with you I will not cry even a single a tear,
And your touch have chased away all of my fear.
You have given me a life that I could live worthwhile,
It is even better every time you smile.

It so magical those things you've made,
To bring back my faith that almost fade.
Now my life is a dream comes true,
It all began when I was loved by you.

Now I have found what I am looking for
It's you and your love and nothing more.
Because you have given me this feeling of contentment,
In my life something I've never felt.

I wish I could talk till the end of day,
But now I'm running out of things to say,
So I'll end by the line you already know,
'I LOVE YOU' more than what I could show.


Comments about A Cute Poem For A Cute Girl by Lawrence CH Hiun

  • Silver Star - 3,994 Points Patricia Grantham (4/4/2014 4:53:00 AM)

    Definitely a cute poem. Sentiments expressed so soft
    and sweet. Good rhyming scheme Lawrence! (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,339 Points Valerie Dohren (2/27/2012 8:44:00 AM)

    A really great love poem - well rhymed and a joy to read. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 4 Points Lawrence H (1/31/2012 9:25:00 PM)

    This is the most beautiful and melodious poem I ever read and also what a lovely and touching love poem by anonymous author. I respect this poet who can composed so beautiful and good rhyme in this poem. I just fall in love with this poem when you read it aloud and many times to your loved ones. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 31, 2012

Poem Edited: Wednesday, February 1, 2012


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