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Kranthi Pothineni


A Dad


Lips went wide with cute milky smile.
Ears played drums with cute musical voice.
Skin felt soft with cute creamy touch.
Heart forgot pain with cute pulpy kick.
Whole world changed with cute sparkling look.

Submitted: Tuesday, December 16, 2008

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/9/2009 7:26:00 PM)

    Heart forgot pain with cute pulpy kick.
    Whole world changed with cute sparkling look..............dad is always dad... childrenbearthe good memoery till last..lovelycombinationof thoughts....10

    read mine papa do u know\/// papa you too? ? ? ? smiley (Report) Reply

  • Indira Renganathan (6/23/2009 11:24:00 PM)

    They talk about the motherliness only generally...glad you 've worded the fatherly feelings....exceptional poem (Report) Reply

  • Saadat Tahir (6/20/2009 10:52:00 PM)

    hi kranthi....you are but looking into a mirror....these feelings and words spring forth on either side such is the beauty ofv this relationship.....
    do my.... daughters...

    and get the other side too

    cheers (Report) Reply

  • Ch J Satyananda Kumar (6/17/2009 12:35:00 AM)

    Excellent! I was subjected to these feeling when I was blessed with a daughter 23 years ago. Thank you Kranthi. God bless you. (Report) Reply

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