A Dad Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

A Dad

Rating: 5.0


Lips went wide with cute milky smile.
Ears played drums with cute musical voice.
Skin felt soft with cute creamy touch.
Heart forgot pain with cute pulpy kick.
Whole world changed with cute sparkling look.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ch J Satyananda Kumar 17 June 2009

Excellent! I was subjected to these feeling when I was blessed with a daughter 23 years ago. Thank you Kranthi. God bless you.

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cuteness in life is a good thing and poem is also cute.

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Walterrean Salley 03 January 2010

The wonders of a proud poppa. Awesome.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 November 2009

Heart forgot pain with cute pulpy kick. Whole world changed with cute sparkling look..............dad is always dad... childrenbearthe good memoery till last..lovelycombinationof thoughts....10 read mine papa do u know\/// papa you too? ? ? ? smiley

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Indira Renganathan 23 June 2009

They talk about the motherliness only generally...glad you 've worded the fatherly feelings....exceptional poem

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Saadat Tahir 20 June 2009

hi kranthi....you are but looking into a mirror....these feelings and words spring forth on either side such is the beauty ofv this relationship..... do my.... daughters... and get the other side too cheers

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