Kranthi Pothineni

A Dad - Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

Lips went wide with cute milky smile.
Ears played drums with cute musical voice.
Skin felt soft with cute creamy touch.
Heart forgot pain with cute pulpy kick.
Whole world changed with cute sparkling look.

Comments about A Dad by Kranthi Pothineni

  • Gold Star - 45,332 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (5/12/2014 9:58:00 AM)

    cuteness in life is a good thing and poem is also cute. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 5,215 Points Walterrean Salley (1/3/2010 2:44:00 PM)

    The wonders of a proud poppa. Awesome. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 98,237 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/9/2009 7:26:00 PM)

    Heart forgot pain with cute pulpy kick.
    Whole world changed with cute sparkling is always dad... childrenbearthe good memoery till last..lovelycombinationof thoughts....10

    read mine papa do u know\/// papa you too? ? ? ? smiley (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,412 Points Indira Renganathan (6/23/2009 11:24:00 PM)

    They talk about the motherliness only generally...glad you 've worded the fatherly feelings....exceptional poem (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,496 Points Saadat Tahir (6/20/2009 10:52:00 PM)

    hi are but looking into a mirror....these feelings and words spring forth on either side such is the beauty ofv this relationship.....
    do my.... daughters...

    and get the other side too

    cheers (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ch J Satyananda Kumar (6/17/2009 12:35:00 AM)

    Excellent! I was subjected to these feeling when I was blessed with a daughter 23 years ago. Thank you Kranthi. God bless you. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 16, 2008

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