sathya narayana

Rookie - 66 Points (12-06-1958 / Nellore, Andhra Pradesh)

A Date With You


You ask me: what I expect
Well! It is just a ‘date’
While the abetting inky night
Writing down a tasteful menu
In candle light just you and I
Looking into each other’s eyes
Our faces glowing in mild halos
Amidst an expectant darkness
And screeching envious crickets
Staring at each other as if
Raring to bare our thoughts
Starting with hors d’oeuvre
Wine, up to a sweet dessert
Allowing it to mature late
Slowly, slyly, but surely
Dissolving the inhibiting clout
Fettering us for too long
To cut the ice
Cuing coquettish passes
Forcing the gluttonous hearts open
Replete with unspelled passions
By those titillating slashes
From great Eros’s stiletto
To spill out our secretive wants
And chase out the dozing dark horse
And, it all for now I thought
Leave the remnant witching hours
To the great Cupid’s verdict

Submitted: Tuesday, June 17, 2008
Edited: Wednesday, June 22, 2011

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  • Rookie - 158 Points Queeny Gona (8/25/2013 11:38:00 PM)

    An amazing write uncle. With my dear aunt in my mind, I read through the poem and I am sure my aunt would felt the same of your youthful date. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 158 Points Queeny Gona (8/25/2013 11:35:00 PM)

    This is really an amazing date uncle. With my dear aunt in my mind, I read through the poem. Beautiful piece of your musings.

    Enjoyed the read and I am sure you would also like and enjoy my poem ' A date with a fool' (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Gayle Anne Goff (4/22/2009 11:57:00 AM)

    YOU ASKED ME TO GIVE YOU MY COMMENT ON YOUR POEM I DID IN
    MY LAST COMMENT I GAVE YOU A TEN PLUS TOLD YOU I WAS GLAD YOU MADE THE TO 500. LIKED THIS POEM (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 34 Points Maia Padua (1/7/2009 8:14:00 AM)

    very romantic write...pictures a very romantic venue....words are amazing with depth....lovely way to treat a lady on a date...this shows Sir Sathya's versatility...
    ...10+++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Booklover Tv Lounger (8/24/2008 2:00:00 AM)

    Truly a joy to read. It showers you with pure emotion and passion. What more could a person want from a love poem. Excellent! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mamta Agarwal (8/23/2008 10:11:00 PM)

    a passionate poem, full of imagery, that holds interest till the end. great Sathya10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kiran Raza (8/9/2008 2:41:00 PM)

    this poem has everything,
    I am blown away
    If I said one thing about how awesome this poem was,
    I wouldn't be able to stop myself from saying how much I love it
    A 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie , aryaindia (7/21/2008 4:47:00 AM)

    Your poem shines in its own light of clairavoyance and the expectations and more becoming and blooming as your thoughts reveal. Fantastic imagery that appeals. Thanks, arya. (Report) Reply

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