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(12-06-1958 / Nellore, Andhra Pradesh)

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A Date With You

You ask me: what I expect
Well! It is just a ‘date’
While the abetting inky night
Writing down a tasteful menu
In candle light just you and I
Looking into each other’s eyes
Our faces glowing in mild halos
Amidst an expectant darkness
And screeching envious crickets
Staring at each other as if
Raring to bare our thoughts
Starting with hors d’oeuvre
Wine, up to a sweet dessert
Allowing it to mature late
Slowly, slyly, but surely
Dissolving the inhibiting clout
Fettering us for too long
To cut the ice
Cuing coquettish passes
Forcing the gluttonous hearts open
Replete with unspelled passions
By those titillating slashes
From great Eros’s stiletto
To spill out our secretive wants
And chase out the dozing dark horse
And, it all for now I thought
Leave the remnant witching hours
To the great Cupid’s verdict

Submitted: Tuesday, June 17, 2008
Edited: Wednesday, June 22, 2011


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  • Queeny Gona (8/25/2013 11:38:00 PM)

    An amazing write uncle. With my dear aunt in my mind, I read through the poem and I am sure my aunt would felt the same of your youthful date.

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  • Queeny Gona (8/25/2013 11:35:00 PM)

    This is really an amazing date uncle. With my dear aunt in my mind, I read through the poem. Beautiful piece of your musings.

    Enjoyed the read and I am sure you would also like and enjoy my poem ' A date with a fool'

  • Gayle Anne Goff (4/22/2009 11:57:00 AM)

    YOU ASKED ME TO GIVE YOU MY COMMENT ON YOUR POEM I DID IN
    MY LAST COMMENT I GAVE YOU A TEN PLUS TOLD YOU I WAS GLAD YOU MADE THE TO 500. LIKED THIS POEM

  • Gayle Anne Goff (4/20/2009 1:57:00 PM)

    GLAD YOU MADE THE TOP 500 GREAT POEM YOU GET A 10

  • Michaela Tatualla (1/8/2009 4:56:00 AM)

    Nice write! Keep it up!

  • Maia Padua (1/7/2009 8:14:00 AM)

    very romantic write...pictures a very romantic venue....words are amazing with depth....lovely way to treat a lady on a date...this shows Sir Sathya's versatility...
    ...10+++++

  • Neha Aradhye (12/2/2008 12:24:00 PM)

    so sweet..
    Your vocab is just great...

  • Rinzu Susan Rajan (11/17/2008 11:33:00 PM)

    a perfect date...and wonderful usage of words...

    :)

  • Seema Aarella (10/18/2008 10:28:00 AM)

    A perfect date...a dream date! Its complete with the fervour of consenting hearts!

  • Reshma Ramesh (9/18/2008 10:12:00 AM)

    wonderful...........makes me want to date again...........10 for you

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