veeraiyah subbulakshmi


A Daughter's Plea.. - Poem by veeraiyah subbulakshmi

Dyed hair, trimmed mustache,
once six packs mid ribs,
ballooned as 'bear' belly,
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Comments about A Daughter's Plea.. by veeraiyah subbulakshmi

  • Rookie - 194 Points Spiritual Seeker (6/22/2012 1:09:00 AM)

    A lesson for all...nice write. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 21,117 Points Valsa George (6/21/2012 9:54:00 PM)

    Humour and gravity proportionally blended .....Interesting write! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 352 Points Rajendran Muthiah (6/13/2012 10:31:00 PM)

    From the point of view of his daughter, the poet gives moral instruction to see and treat others of her sex, as he does do to her. This effective, wonderful technique deserves *****. (Report) Reply








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