A Day, Alifetime Poem by ritty patnaik
A Day, Alifetime
the ice plant,
slowly unfolds
with the first morning rays.
myraid shades of pink,
twinkle to greet the sun.
by noon they are, drunkenly,
smothered by bees,
evening, smilingly,
puts them to sleep.
it is a lyric poem with descriptive language in a color theme..There are 4 words; ice plant, bees and alifetime, which are the frame for this poem...10++
Another beauty, Ritty.... I am getting to know you: -) Ruthie
Many plants and insects only live for a day and menage to fulfil their purpose in life. Sweet poem.
Simple words, yet so meaningful. I love the way you express yourself.
Lovely, life is just a fleeting moment, but it is a time to live our dreams.
A poem covering the entirity of life. Well done. A mosquito has only nine days life. A butterfly has only a month. If we start reflecting from such angles, man would definitely become more pious and lovable to his fellow beings. We need poems like this to enable us to reflect on totality of life. Good work.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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How wonderful....you catch the nature to capture the reader10